The next version will be slightly more flared at the collar edge and more scalloped at the neck edge. And then I'll put the pattern up on Ravelry. Or at least that's the plan.
My knitting mates felt that it was better to omit the actual 'berries' from the Berry Cluster Stitch so as not to create too much tension between motifs. I'm going to add some to the pattern version tho', just as an option.
So. Whaddya think? You like it?
Edited to show later scalloped version. Me likey.